Obscurity of Feelings

 “The Storm Broke” by Suzán Jiván Mom & Mom-Mom Suzán  The storm broke in a formal pose  juxtaposed nude and clothed  poets and critics as artistic creeds  of upheaval emphasizing feeling  turning towards sympathy  and mystery of technique  figures stepping out of pictures into a mist …

 “Say No More” by Suzán Jiván Mom & Mom-Mom Suzán  Say no more nevermore  not by a long shot poles apart called to order gauging support  goosing the box office  playing an orphan cleared of cloying  poignantly left longing …

“What Time?!” by Suzán Jiván Mom & Mom-Mom Suzán  What time?! How soon? How late? How long? Why now? How come?  Well! I never! Bloody hell!

 “On the Down Low” by Suzán Jiván Mom & Mom-Mom Suzán  On the down low above the fold  noticeable showy between you and me in secrecy  betwixt and between …

 “A Sneaking Suspicion” by Suzán Jiván Mom & Mom-Mom Suzán A sneaking suspicion a hunch a funny feeling  a conjecture a guess diffidence wariness wobbling hemming and hawing  a tinge then a twitch or two …

 “Long and Drawn Out” by Suzán Jiván Mom & Mom-Mom Suzán  Long and drawn out far reaching  ranging elongated spun out dragged out  long winded tedious circuitous windy  gabby chatty drab straggling flat …